Fountain of Mana - English H-Game NEW ver. OCT2017 OUT!


Nerion2

Demon Girl Pro
Jul 20, 2015
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Hi. I am Nerion and I`ve been lurking on this forum for some time but today I`m stepping out of shadows. I would like to show you my little creation.







Game is set in late medieval magic fantasy setting. Player takes control of a young girl named Ravy. She is a smart and beautiful female mage which is the exception in a world dominated by male mages. But there is a reason why things are like that.

This is a H game so you are probably wondering what H content will be in the game. Game has clothing system when you can dress Ravy up piece by piece (panties, bra, skirt, socks etc.). Amount of clothes that Ravy is wearing have impact on conversations and events. It's not a game when you can run around in revealing clothes or without them and it doesn't change anything. There will be a lot exhibitionism in the game as well as corruption. Corruption will be slow but in time, there will be a lot of different activities which she will preform. I will not list them here, just play the game and you will find hints.
Screenshots:









Version MAR21 is out!

Download:
http://www.patreon.com/fountainofmana
It's in one of the public posts. If you don't want to see boys standing pics (affect only pictures when talking to them) choose 'no boys' version.

You need RTP to play.

If you have problems with figuring what to do look at this hints(OLD):

-Check out herbalist shop and bar during day and night.
-Old woman in village can help you and she has a lot to tell.
-If you can't find the bear look for the green marks on the ground
-Talk with Marienne during the day

More detailed walk trough.
walkthrough:



Check out my patreon page. It's in one of the posts.


I`ve worked on this for a long time and I hope you'll enjoy playing it.

You can also visit my patreon page:
http://www.patreon.com/fountainofmana


And of course credits. Many thanks to:
kaosfear - corrected my grammar and helped me testing game
Krosh - great ideas and help
scallywag13 - help with few nasty bugs
Nytemare, SerphLantern and others - help with bugs

CREDITS:
SOON
 
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tontje

Tentacle Monster
Feb 19, 2012
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Trying to make a joke involving the legend of mana, but it isn't working out.
Guess ill just try the game then......

Interesting start, other then some spelling errors and the lagginess near the training soldiers it seems to be fine.

About 20 min of playtime till the end, so you either have an earlier version on mega or i dunno.
 
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Erylein

Jungle Girl
Mar 12, 2014
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Not bad. Hope you will end this game someday.
 

moonblack

Evard's Tentacles of Forced Intrusion
May 10, 2014
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Interesting start, other then some spelling errors and the lagginess near the training soldiers it seems to be fine.

About 20 min of playtime till the end, so you either have an earlier version on mega or i dunno.
I too noticed some lag at that area. Looks like it's not just me. And yes, it's really closer to 20 minutes than an hour of playtime.

A few other things:
- the rats seem completely unrelated to the rest of the quest. I managed to get the keys and open the chest without fighting the rats. The only reason I bothered to kill them was because I could not finish the quest otherwise
- the message about the rapier is not displayed until you find the rats. It's rather annoying to go all the way down to the cellar only to then have to go back up to her room just to get her weapon
- When talking to Lady Lilian the text displays the wrong name
- the chest in Ravy's room changes picture after it's open
 

Sangoku25

Tentacle God
Mar 6, 2011
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#5
Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

So I examined geese time the crate and the se be sol with her in the room does not there is nothing.
 

YummyTiger

Tentacle God
Feb 7, 2014
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

A good start! Love to see new English games! Woohoo! :D

Here is a quick review of what I liked and what I thought could use a little love. Overall though, I thought you set a nice tone with the story and setting.

Pros:
- Mapping! Your maps are well done. I love Celianna's tiles, and thought you did well throughout. Make sure you give Celianna credit though!
- Exhibitionism and Clothing. You've set a pretty hefty goal in trying to get NPCs to react differently to exactly how Ravy is clothed. If you succeed, it could be epic!
- Mind Reading. What a wonderful game mechanic. This is SO much potential to make things erotic. I already love some of the banter associated with it.
- Story and interactiveness. Thought you set a nice overall tone and liked that you did not fully ignore the little extras like comments about books, potions, etc. Note: I would highly recommend getting someone to proofread for you, as there are a number of spelling mistakes.

Undecided:
- Combat. It was not bad nor great, just kind of meh. It does its job and if it is not the primary focus of the game, it should be fine. I will note, that you can lose days/weeks/months of your development time if you choose to delve into configuring RPG Maker's combat system.
- Artwork. Your artwork is not bad and it does the job. It was just something that I was not crazy over. Still, the context could easily overshadow this.

Needs Lovin':
- Blind searches and quest advancing. Just my two cents, but I would avoid the blind search method for quest advancing. Having to run around and blindly mind read everyone until I found this one random guy (who comically was the ONLY NPC I forgot to mind read on my first pass...). Instead, add a minor hint, like you dad humming something after the talk or Ravy feeling her divination tingle when she enters the building.
- Portrait system. This is more of a bug, but when I removed multiple clothes, the portrait did not update properly. Meaning, I removed her blouse and skirt and the portrait only recognized that her blouse was removed until I entered the menu and exited again.
- Night only exhibitionism. Not sure if this is a corruption game and eventually she'll walk around topless or without underwear in the daylight, but... I was sad to see the night only concept gaining traction. Mainly, cause I love exhibitionism. That said, I can understand why you would take that route.

All in all, loved what little I've seen. One man game development is a bitch, so I wish you loads of luck, and I wish Ravy loads of... err, we'll stop there.
 

Nerion2

Demon Girl Pro
Jul 20, 2015
112
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#7
Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Thank you all for replies.


Interesting start, other then some spelling errors and the lagginess near the training soldiers it seems to be fine.

About 20 min of playtime till the end, so you either have an earlier version on mega or i dunno.
I`m aware of lagginess and I will do something with it later.
As for playtime... I`ve playtested it before releasing and it took me an hour. I talked with every NPC and read everyone`s mind. Well, probably I was just slow.

A few other things:
- the rats seem completely unrelated to the rest of the quest. I managed to get the keys and open the chest without fighting the rats. The only reason I bothered to kill them was because I could not finish the quest otherwise
- the message about the rapier is not displayed until you find the rats. It's rather annoying to go all the way down to the cellar only to then have to go back up to her room just to get her weapon
- When talking to Lady Lilian the text displays the wrong name
- the chest in Ravy's room changes picture after it's open
Well, rats are unrelated to opening the chest but Ravy has to kill them to pass test.
About rapier. She is sleepy-head so she don`t remember about it until last moment.
Thank you for pointing other bugs.

So I examined geese time the crate and the se be sol with her in the room does not there is nothing.
Sorry but I don`t understand you.

I`m using a lot of custom tiles and scripts and I will of course credit everyone. I haven`t done that yet because it`s a bit messy inside. Wait a bit until I sort things up.
Yes,I need someone to proofread for me, so if anyone here have a free time please point out my mistakes.

About combat: I`m aiming to make it a bit more strategic than normal RPGM system. There will be companions and all. It is just too early.
About artwork: Yay! I`m glad you don`t hate it. This is the first time I`ve drawn anything so there is a lot of room to improve.

Well, making you to readmind everyone in the castle might have been an obverkill, heh.
Ah, bug with portrait... Something to work on...
And it won`t be night only. Just wait.


Thank you everyone again.
 

Xil

Grim Reaper
Sep 18, 2014
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#8
Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Oh I like this.

I have a feeling mind reading is going to be fun. Especially when you want to tease people only so that you can read their thoughts later. Like that boy and the ladder part during the night section.
 
Nov 22, 2008
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Looks very promising. I really like people trying new systems and I'm really looking forward to where it leads.

Now onto my impressions from playing through.

I love the mind reading system and got a kick out of mind reading the kid after climbing down the ladder from the wall. The indignant response from the noble daughter if you interact with her in mind reading mode was also well placed. The change in portrait to show her climbing up or down is a very nice touch and I hope to see more stuff like that to come. I can see how it can add a very nice layer of interaction but I hope you don't get bogged down having to come up with mind reading states for too many interaction states or the player getting bogged down trying to mind read everyone. Perhaps some sort of marker when in mind reading mode to mark targets so players know who has a mind worth reading (maybe different markers for important stuff and the ones that are just flavour) and so you don't overwork having to write too many mind reading statements.

The clothing system is nice but I too ran into the issue where I got her to change into the swimsuit top and bottom but the profile still showed the blouse until I entered and exited the menu again.

The slowdown in the yard around the soldiers is a bit annoying but is probably fixable.

The art is ok, not fantastic but very workable, particularly if you can achieve the sort of depth through storytelling the demo suggests you have in mind.
 

MidnightXV

Mystic Girl
Jun 23, 2015
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Will be keeping an eye on this
 

Key'

Demon Girl Master
Apr 7, 2015
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Will be keeping an eye on this
Yeah me too! Like 'YummyTiger' said, it's always nice to see more English games! Keep it up :)!

Not going to mention any problems, they've all been mentioned already :).
 

ragm54

Demon Girl Master
Aug 21, 2013
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#12
Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Decent start, and the artwork is also decent, I mean some japanese circles have very bad artwork, yours is good. Keep it up buddy.
 

Sangoku25

Tentacle God
Mar 6, 2011
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#13
Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sangoku25 View Post
So I examined geese time the crate and the se be sol with her in the room does not there is nothing.
Sorry but I don`t understand you.
German better^^.

Hab den man der in gedanken sagt das er es wol in ihr Zimmer was versteckt hat. und find die Kiste einfach nicht.
 
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

As a huge fan of exhibitionism I can tell you I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.

I was a little disappointed that using the light spell did not give the kid a show when climbing down the ladder without panties, it was still too dark to see anything. >.<

Mind reading is fun. There definitely needs to be some proof reading but the polish does not need to be right now, it can come once the game is closer to completion or when you want to make a public demo release. It isn't really significant enough to warrant time spent hunting them down yourself.

Edit. I also noticed a bug in the prison. The walls (prison bars) aren't solid, you can walk right through though the door seems to be functioning.
 
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Ericridge

Tentacle God
Feb 5, 2012
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Played it, seems okay.
 

remicks

Demon Girl Pro
Mar 18, 2015
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Just popping in to share my 2 cents. I love the themes you've gone with (exhibitionism, clothing changes, and I assume corruption) so please do keep it up. If you need help let me know.
 
Mar 6, 2013
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Levels are well done. You might want to get someone to proof read the written stuff. Many spelling mistakes. You can walk through objects and the cell wall on the first basement level
 
Oct 8, 2014
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

In love with it! Hope you can continue and also hope it is free to play :3

Some of my suggestion is that the town is kinda laggy when she walk by the soldiers practicing.
 

Nerion2

Demon Girl Pro
Jul 20, 2015
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Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Thanky you all for positive feedback. Don`t worry I`m working on it everyday.

Perhaps some sort of marker when in mind reading mode to mark targets so players know who has a mind worth reading (maybe different markers for important stuff and the ones that are just flavour) and so you don't overwork having to write too many mind reading statements.

The clothing system is nice but I too ran into the issue where I got her to change into the swimsuit top and bottom but the profile still showed the blouse until I entered and exited the menu again.

The slowdown in the yard around the soldiers is a bit annoying but is probably fixable.
You`re right about mind reading, I will figure something out. Same with clothing. Slowdown in the yard was simple mistake and it`s now gone.


I was a little disappointed that using the light spell did not give the kid a show when climbing down the ladder without panties, it was still too dark to see anything. >.<


Edit. I also noticed a bug in the prison. The walls (prison bars) aren't solid, you can walk right through though the door seems to be functioning.
Well, he was probably blinded by it. I mean, source of light is above Ravy`s head so for now shadow is strong. Thanks for pointing out prision bug.

In love with it! Hope you can continue and also hope it is free to play :3
Of course it is and will be free.
 

Asapien

Jungle Girl
Oct 9, 2012
8
0
#20
Re: Fountain of Mana - English Hentai Game

Awesome start, I also love the themes in it.

At night the candle next to the kid by the ladder, seems to flicker if you interact with it but nothing seemed to happen ( i had been wondering if you could move it). I'm guessing its just a quirk not really a big deal.